December Meeting

Our December meeting is an in-person dinner in Ottawa. If you are interested in attending please contact communications@capitalcrimewriters.com  before December 7, 2025.

Guest Speaker: Bernadette Cox:  Editing A Capital Mystery

Bernadette will share what events brought her to editing fiction and talk about her role co-editing A Capital Mystery, the highly acclaimed anthology of short crime stories by Ottawa writers, published by Ottawa Press and Publishing. She’ll share the early steps taken to determine if the project was feasible, highlight some common errors and bright spots in the writing and leave tips for writers to consider before submitting stories. She will also let us know what she found to be the most difficult parts of the job and what she learned from the experience. She hopes to hear from CCW members, many whose work appears in the anthology, about their views on the writer-editor relationship, particularly how to improve it. Those who contributed stories to the anthology will be encouraged to share what they found exciting, annoying and/or fun about the project.

After 10 years in community and farm journalism, Bernadette Cox moved to corporate communications, first with the Canadian Federation of Agriculture and then leading the communications unit of the Canadian Egg Marketing Agency. Completing 21 years in corporate agriculture communications, she began freelancing and has written and edited for national organizations in the fields of health, municipal affairs and labour. She is among the editors of Mike Martin’s award-winning Sgt. Windflower Mysteries and edited his first poetry book, Hope and Love and Other Dreams. Together with Mike, she edited A Capital Mystery, an anthology of short stories written by Ottawa and Ottawa-area authors, and has just finished helping him with his second book of poetry, which is scheduled for release in early 2026.

November Meeting

All the Feels – Crafting Your Reader’s Emotional Journey by Pam Barnsley, Wednesday, November 12, 2025 at 7:00 pm (EST)

Of all the skills we writers bring to our short stories and novels, the ability to evoke an emotional response in our readers is arguably our most vital. When our reader feels their own fear, anger, sympathy, desire for revenge, nostalgia for a time gone by, laughter, heartache—that is what engages them.

Great hooks, strong voice, tight plotting, interesting characters, and smooth prose are all important, but the greatest satisfaction for the reader comes from having gone on their own emotional journey. There are tips and tricks we can use in our writing to evoke those emotions.

Pam Barnsley is a writer living on Vancouver Island, whose short stories have appeared in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine, Black Cat Weekly, Cold Canadian Crime Anthology, Midnight Schemers and Daydream Believers Anthology, and Dangerous Games Anthology. Her novel, The River Cage, was shortlisted for the Crime Writers of Canada Best Unpublished Novel in 2020. Her short literary story, The Troll Artist, was longlisted for the CBC Short Story Prize in 2025. Pam is a member of Crime Writers of Canada, and Sisters in Crime. She is also a former snowboard instructor, award-winning poet, and from her father she learned the ancient art of training a cat to jump over a stick. Find her at www.pambarnsley.com.

October Meeting

Forensic Field Techniques for Human Remains by Christopher Courtin: Wednesday, October 8, 2025 at 7:00 pm (EDT)

Forensic Field Techniques for Human Remains  is based on an educational documentary DVD produced for students of forensic science and as a reference for law enforcement officers. Working with experts from Laurentian University’s Forensic Science department, the roles, equipment and procedures used by anthropologists, botanists, and entomologists (or bones, plants, and bugs) are explored. Topics such as techniques for searching, the body decomposition timeline, and the effects of exposure to fire and water are covered. 

Christopher Courtin was educated as a scientist but has worked primarily in visual storytelling as a cameraman, editor, and director. He is the author of the “Margot & Harley” comedic mystery series, and lives in Victoria, BC, with his wife and two children.

January Meeting

Great Beginnings: Hank Phillippi Ryan – January 13 at 7:00 pm.

You know the great opening lines: Ishmael, Manderley, the last camel. Why do those work? And how can you create one for your own novel?  And then–what about that crucial first paragraph? And a first page that will entice editors and enchant readers? How can you set the proper expectations for the story to come—and make every word work?  

This workshop, led by award-winning thriller writer Hank Phillippi Ryan, will dissect and analyze acclaimed first lines and opening paragraphs, and reveal the writing secrets these brilliant examples offer. If you are brave enough–please bring your own first line! 

HANK PHILLIPPI RYAN is the USA Today bestselling author of 12 thrillers, winning five Agathas and the Mary Higgins Clark Award, and 37 EMMYs for TV investigative reporting. THE MURDER LIST (2019) won the Anthony Award for Best Novel, and is an Agatha, Macavity and Mary Higgins Clark Award nominee. Her newest psychological standalone is THE FIRST TO LIE. The Publishers Weekly starred review says “Stellar. Ryan could win her sixth Agatha with this one.”

More information can be found at her website.

October Meeting

Our next meeting, “Poisons as Murder Weapons” will be on October 14, 2020 at 7:00 pm.

Dwayne Clayden combines his knowledge and experience as a police officer and paramedic to write crime thrillers. He is the best-selling author of the Brad Coulter Series. The 5th book in the series will be released in 2021. His new series, Speargrass-Opiod is available for pre-order from Kindle.

He is a popular speaker at conferences and to writing groups presenting on realistic police, medical and paramedic procedures. And we’re honoured to have him. Check out his website.

Dwayne’s books are available from: Kobo and Amazon

As a reminder, due to COVID-19 and the need to maintain physical distancing, CCW will not be having in-person meetings until further notice. Instead we will be going on-line. Members will be emailed the Zoom link to join the meeting each month. If you’d like to check us out before joining, you can attend one meeting for free. Please email treasurer@capitalcrimewriters.com for the link.

CCW April 2015 Meeting: Elections & PIZZA!

Got a taste for blood (and pizza)? Feeling bloody-minded? Then why not join us!

Our next meeting is on Wednesday April 8, 2015 in the Honeywell Room at Ottawa City Hall.  It begins at 6:45.  Pizza will be served.  The 2015-2016 election for the CCW Executive will then take place.  PLEASE COME TO THIS MEETING IF YOU ARE FREE.  If you are interested in putting your name forward for any of the executive positions, please email Michael Murphy president@capitalcrimewriters.com.   The CCW executive needs new blood.  We welcome fresh blood to the executive.

Our yearly book exchange also takes place.  Bring a couple of mysteries you have read to the meeting, leave them on the table and go home with something new to read.

Time permitting, we will have a round the table discussion of what we are currently reading.  Go home with suggestions from CCW members of what to read next, from Ottawa’s most discerning mystery readers

IF YOU ARE COMING TO THIS MEETING, PLEASE REPLY TO Michael Murphy
president@capitalcrimewriters.com  so he knows how much pizza to bring.

FINAL REMINDER: Entries for the “Audrey” short story contest close on April 1st. No fooling.

February 11th, 2014 WORKSHOP

GOAL! MOTIVATION AND CONFLICT: THE FOUNDATION OF COMMERCIAL FICTION

Next meeting, February 11th, 2014, Ottawa City Hall, Honeywell Room.

Madeline McBride will present this workshop.  Writers , are your characters’ goals and conflict strong enough to carry the story?  This interactive craft workshop will help you describe what your characters want, the stakes, and what’s stopping them from reaching their goals.
In an exercise using a simple template, you’ll identify your hero/heroine’s internal and external goals, motivations, consequences/stakes and conflict (GMCC).  Those willing to share will have the opportunity to  get feedback on their work-in-progress GMCC’s.  The resulting comprehensive  GMCC  sentences, one for each character can be key elements of pitches
This workshop is based on Debra Dixon’s GMC: Goal, Motivation & Conflict, arguably an essential craft resource for writers of commercial fiction genres such as mysteries, thrillers, sci-fi, fantasy, romance etc.
Madeline McBride (Presenter) is currently President of Ottawa Romance Writers Association, writes as Madelle Morgan.  She’s completed six books, although three were for practice as she honed her craft!  She won or placed  in several writing contests.